Runaway love

Runaway love

Runaway Love

Runaway Love

curving on the street’s end ,in the footpath’s bend
the lil kid is so cold and none’s around to lend
his feet all swollen , his eyes so blank
the fate of life written on his own hands
he tries to figure out y all’s so black
y everyone’s so mean and want to sack
y a world of dumbs is all he can find
y is everyone so harsh and not so kind
starin at the dirty walls in the back-street
he tries to find stars in his hand’s streaks
but all he finds are the scratches that burn
ashes from the past with memories so stern
memories of a mom who died without medicine
of a dad always drunk who never called him son
and as tears roll down his beautiful cheeks
death pities him and he’s so weak
opening the cold arms ,it embraces him
only to let him drown in a calm ,happy sleep


15 thoughts on “Runaway love

  1. Oh my goodness! a tremendous article dude. Thank you However I am experiencing problem with ur rss . Don’t know why Unable to subscribe to it. Is there anyone getting an identical rss problem? Anyone who knows kindly respond. Thnkx

  2. Such a sad, emotive piece of writing which truly encapsulates poetry. The imagery is so alive and real, I could almost touch it – such an impressive piece of work.

  3. Sadly, children suffer these kinds of lives in our world today, where money is tight and parents fight, drink, do drugs and leave children to suffer in the silence of their lonely dark rooms…..or the homeless child in the alley way struggling day to day looking for that someone to lift them up by their hand and show them what it really is to love….

  4. To be but a humble thought on the lips of precious memories is how my legacy lives on forever in your hearts. Love poetry!

  5. I would love to be able to win an iPad for my wife and kids. After we were burgled in May we haven’t been able to get the money together to replace the laptop and would be a lovely way to start the summer holidays


  6. A beautiful poem, brings a tear to your eye. Just makes me so glad its not a sadness I have ever had to endure! Makes you think though

  7. Really a heart touching lines. i can feel the pain of that kid, who is walking alone…live alone. i can understand that cause i live alone far from my family…and feel same. 😦

  8. i feel so sad for the kid who live alone….just express my pain in following lines…
    “”Alone walking through life,without any pride,
    How can you be satisfied,Living your life like you do..
    Wanting to hv someone,To live ma life with,
    But fr now,I wil continue alone,””

  9. That is so sad yet so real for so many children. I look at my 9 month old son and am baffled how a person can be so cruel and uncaring to such a beautiful miracle as a child.
    Lovely and emotive writing.

  10. A very true,sensational and heart touching piece. Tears filled up my eyes by reading this poor child’s suffering. Surely ,ALLAH loves his men more than 70 mothers and when people stop showing mercy and kindness, God brings relief to them by making them sleep a forever calm sleep wheres there no one to disturb. This is not the story of only one poor soul but surely many around us unknown. May God alleviate their pain and reduce their misery

  11. It really pitiful and full of sorrow bringing tears to my eyes. We are lucky that we are not living a ridiculous life as the poor child. I have written this but however,your story is so touchy that no one can challenge your writing skills.

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